- Specifically useful, e.g. it tells you why
- Feedback I want hear (makes you feel good)
- Feedback you don't understand or needs expanding
Specifically Useful
- Good use of visual props to support information
- Research strongly supported with images throughout
- Good to include advertisements made it relevant
- Could of included interviews to highlight personality
- Good explantation of relationships and involvement with graphic design and how she promotes for companies
- Like the inclusion of how she relates to different audiences
Feedback I want/ like to hear
- Spoke Confidently
- Good coverage of her musical career tied in with graphic design
- Good factual information, memorable
- Good initial introduction- base history e.t.c.
- Deep understanding of subject with accurate facts and a good graphic design relation
- Thorough research
- Entertaining and Engaging
- Clearly presented
- Strong facts and style to design with / for - I didn't really what was meant by 'with / for'
- Link to graphic design made early in the presentation - Why is this ? Is it good or a bad thing ?
- Target Audience mentioned - same as above
Three objectives to improve this Summer Brief
- I could of included some interviews/ videos of Katy Perry, but they are on my blog
- I could of brought in physical examples of her products/ merchandise
- Mention albums/CDs within merchandising, as they are merchandise ! And talked more about the artwork e.c.t.
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